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How do you feel right now?

Started by Appelmoes??, Wed, 2005-10-26, 20:39:46

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Bupie

#2100
Inspired ...

I just wrote lyrics for the next Ten/Symphony X/Dream Theater/Megadeth (or whatever band slightly related to metal) album.

The song is called The sweet revenge of Cicero which is a cool title methinks  ;)

So let's go :

He fought along with Young Cato
Against Antonius and Caesar
Lost his life in this civil war
An unintentional hero


[chorus] The sweet revenge of Cicero
Is in the memory of his name
Did he expect to end that low
After a life so filled with fame ?


His words have stood the test of time
He never feared to let them flow
He paid for them on his own dime
Stabbed by daggers in afterglow


[chorus]
[cool break and killer guitar solo]

Playing with words can be a crime
In the enclosure of Senate
You never know when comes the time
To take part in your last debate ...


[repeat your last debate]
[short guitar solo]
[repeat chorus twice]

***

Of course I took a few liberties with History but, hey, what (prog)metal head will care ?  ;D

So, do you think I have a future as a rock lyricist  ???  Well, feel free not to answer this question ...  ;D

PH

That would do good as a Power Metal song! ;D
Really cool! Well done Bupie!
I like it how "killer guitar solo" rhymes with "daggers in afterglow" although I don't have a clue what you mean by that. ;)

Bupie

Quote from: PH on Tue, 2009-05-12, 14:41:38
I like it how "killer guitar solo" rhymes with "daggers in afterglow"

???  :D

Quotealthough I don't have a clue what you mean by that. ;)

Well, maybe it's "by" afterglow or "at" afterglow or "on" afterglow ? Anyway I chose the word for the purpose of the rhyme and in my mind it was meaning  something like "near dark"  ;)

The Butterfly Man

#2103
I feel great, I will be going to Cuba on June 5th so no more worries in the holiday-department! :D

8) 8) 8)

Tom
There will be white clouds beyond the hills...

PH

That's cool Tom!
You realise you have to tell us all about it when you get back.
And take some pictures of course! ;D

Steve Jones

Quote from: Bupie on Tue, 2009-05-12, 13:29:15
So, do you think I have a future as a rock lyricist  ???  Well, feel free not to answer this question ...  ;D

That's cool, although the guitar solo could have been better ;)

Perhaps one day I'll have a go myself.  I've got a rough idea for something called "We're Gonna Rock Rock 'til We Drop, and Then We're Gonna Rock Some More".  It's in an 80s hair-metal style.  Or did you guess? ;D
Regards, Steve Jones

"Then I'll know my bet will win, when the saints go marching in"

The Butterfly Man

Quote from: PH on Tue, 2009-05-12, 19:58:42
That's cool Tom!
You realise you have to tell us all about it when you get back.
And take some pictures of course! ;D

Yes sir! But only because you say so. Otherwise I would leave my camera at home... ;)

Tom
There will be white clouds beyond the hills...

PH

Quote from: The Butterfly Man on Tue, 2009-05-12, 20:41:57
Yes sir! But only because you say so. Otherwise I would leave my camera at home... ;)

Ah, good to see that you can follow orders. ;)

Bupie

Quote from: Steve Jones on Tue, 2009-05-12, 20:16:59
Perhaps one day I'll have a go myself.  I've got a rough idea for something called "We're Gonna Rock Rock 'til We Drop, and Then We're Gonna Rock Some More".  It's in an 80s hair-metal style.  Or did you guess? ;D

That sounds promising  ;D

Quote from: The Butterfly Man on Tue, 2009-05-12, 18:12:57
I feel great, I will be going to Cuba on June 5th so no more worries in the holiday-department! :D

8) 8) 8)

Tom

That sounds promising too :)

Manatee

Relaxed:  I wasn't entirely useless in the past day, and now I'm having pleasant conversation, listening to good music, and imbibing the holy black nectar.
"What is that sound?  It's confusing, and boy is it loud!"

The Butterfly Man

Quote from: Bupie on Wed, 2009-05-13, 10:17:50
That sounds promising too :)

Indeed, I can't tell you how much I'm looking forward to it. I'm really counting the days (23 still to go! ;)). Sure, it was a major letdown that my trip to Mexico got cancelled, but delving deeper into Cuba's culture and history has really awoken my interest!

I guess Mexico has to wait just a little longer... :D

Tom
There will be white clouds beyond the hills...

maddox

Quote from: The Butterfly Man on Tue, 2009-05-12, 18:12:57
I feel great, I will be going to Cuba on June 5th so no more worries in the holiday-department! :D

8) 8) 8)

Tom

Ah great!

Gives you the chance to drive in very old, sixties kind auto mobiles.  :D
Cause of Injury: Lack of Adhesive Ducks.

The Butterfly Man

Quote from: maddox on Wed, 2009-05-13, 13:48:16
Gives you the chance to drive in very old, sixties kind auto mobiles.  :D

Yeah I read that as well! It's not a Formula 1 car, but it'll do... ;D

Tom
There will be white clouds beyond the hills...

maddox

Quote from: The Butterfly Man on Wed, 2009-05-13, 14:06:14
Yeah I read that as well! It's not a Formula 1 car, but it'll do... ;D

Tom

Who needs a Formula 1 car?  ???

;D
Cause of Injury: Lack of Adhesive Ducks.

Steve Jones

Quote from: maddox on Wed, 2009-05-13, 19:51:03
Who needs a Formula 1 car?  ???

Well Lewis Hamilton would look a bit of a tit on a bicycle ;)
Regards, Steve Jones

"Then I'll know my bet will win, when the saints go marching in"

PH

Quote from: Steve Jones on Wed, 2009-05-13, 19:59:10
Well Lewis Hamilton would look a bit of a tit on a bicycle ;)

But with a bike you can get anywhere you want!

maddox

Quote from: PH on Wed, 2009-05-13, 20:05:14
But with a bike you can get anywhere you want!

Though not with a staggering speed of 250 miles per hour.  :D
Cause of Injury: Lack of Adhesive Ducks.

Steve Jones

Quote from: PH on Wed, 2009-05-13, 20:05:14
But with a bike you can get anywhere you want!

Except possibly pole position ;)
Regards, Steve Jones

"Then I'll know my bet will win, when the saints go marching in"

Manatee

Preemptively Aggravated - I get to talk to lawyers tomorrow morning.   :P
"What is that sound?  It's confusing, and boy is it loud!"

maddox

Quote from: Manatee on Thu, 2009-05-14, 22:02:57
Preemptively Aggravated - I get to talk to lawyers tomorrow morning.   :P

Then you should know the difference between a good lawyer and a great lawyer.

A good lawyer knows the law. A great lawyer knows the judge.  ;)

I feel... .. . tip.
Cause of Injury: Lack of Adhesive Ducks.

Manatee

Officially Aggravated - I've spoken to the legal folks.  It's not them I'm aggravated with.  An ex-wife of my (deceased) father is making a fuss about things she claims she never got that she was entitled to from their divorce.  This is ridiculous since the divorce and dad's death were over 10 years ago, and she surely would have spoken up then if she really thought she was owed something, however she's still managing to make a major pain of herself.  Since I'm the executor of the estate, that means she's being a major pain to me in particular.  Grrrrrrr.  This is definitely going to be a Guinness night, or possibly Dewar's.
"What is that sound?  It's confusing, and boy is it loud!"

Manatee

Tired but cautiously optimistic - Was awakened by the estate lawyer today, but I forgive him because he had good news -- He did some research, and it looks probable that we can make the crazy woman's claims go away.  Think good thoughts for me because if that turns out to be incorrect, I might just eat some bad kelp so I don't have to deal with it anymore.  This being the case, I may not need you to come make threatening noises in French, Bupie, although if you felt like flying to Pittsburgh (famed for, well, not much, other than a failing steel industry and people who talk funny), we could go see the Three Rivers Prog festival, which includes IQ and It Bites this year.  Best not wear the brie pajamas there though, as the locals may not be cultured enough to appreciate it.   ;)
"What is that sound?  It's confusing, and boy is it loud!"

maddox

I feel fine.

The tree that once was is no more.  *horns* *horns* *horns*

It costed me my back but despite that minor detail i'm quite happy with it.  ;D
Cause of Injury: Lack of Adhesive Ducks.

Steve Jones

Quote from: maddox on Sun, 2009-05-24, 15:45:47
The tree that once was is no more.  *horns* *horns* *horns*

It costed me my back but despite that minor detail i'm quite happy with it.  ;D

Similar story here.  A whole day in the garden: removed a tree and various bits of lawn amongst other things.  I feel just about ready to have a label tied around my big toe :o ;)
Regards, Steve Jones

"Then I'll know my bet will win, when the saints go marching in"

Steve Jones

It's official.  I woke up dead.  Bloody gardening! :o
Regards, Steve Jones

"Then I'll know my bet will win, when the saints go marching in"